Standing at your doorstep

I’m standing at your doorstep
About to knock the door
But something holds me back
And I turned, to return

It’s just a feeling I got
It’s just a crush I thought
The way you smiled at me
The way you were
The times we talked
The moment when we together walked
I got a feeling each second there
And the feeling made me feel better

Standing at your doorstep
I remember the moment
How the time seemed to vanish
Just at a blink

Standing at your doorstep
I go back to the moment that I left
The unfinished job
The unsaid words
And just an imagination
How life would be like
If together we had been
What if you opened the door
And I walked in

Standing at your doorstep
I want to make a confession
A confession of secret affection
A confession of hidden feelings
A confession of certain magnetism
A confession of everything
But before you open the door
I‘ll be going away

Standing at your doorstep
I feel my eyes wet
For not missing you
But for not loving you
The way you do

The unknocked knock 

Comments

  1. amitMarch 31, 2011 at 11:24 PM

    NYC
    Beautiful

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  2. deepak sthapitApril 3, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    u know something??
    M too standing on someone's doorstep..and someone also standing on my doorstep...so wat suggetions ud u gimme??

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  3. shaniApril 3, 2011 at 5:31 PM

    hey d23 if you are sure yo u can step inside....just give a knock :)and all the best

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  4. deepak sthapitApril 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    i wud knock da door but how can i come out of my room since someone is standing on my doorstep???

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  5. shaniApril 4, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    you got to decide on your own whether you want to step inside the door or want the other to enter into yours

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  6. deepak sthapitApril 4, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    its hard to decide so i felt i sud stay alone in my room...
    ani shani....ur words are alwaz beautiful..feels like u are writing my heart...keep it up dear :)

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  7. AnonymousApril 4, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    ur writing really makes me carried away...gud wrk..kip it up

    ReplyDelete
  8. shaniApril 4, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    you gotta read this one
    http://bebecks.blogspot.com/2011/04/knock.html

    ReplyDelete
  9. deepak sthapitApril 5, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    m read it...wow....
    You are standin on his door step and hes ready to open the door...Even before you knock"

    ReplyDelete

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